Literature Mel
Part 5!
New Story!!!!!
The plane trip was very long, although I slept half of the way as we flew through the night. The other half I was talking to Issy and Frankie: the best people I could be on a trip with. Issy is mad, random, larger than life and, at times, ‘blonde’. Frankie is one of these people who are friendly, kind, fun and have a great sense of humour. And then there’s me, bubbly and up for anything. The perfect team.
We arrived in Brazil at the crack of dawn and the heat hit us like a wave. I was very glad I had my baggy shorts on and a strapped top. Poor Issy had jeans on.
“Right guys, we’re ‘ere. We need to set off now straight away. Got ya’ water bottles?” Leo said apprehensively.
“Yes…” we all said simultaneously.
“Let’s go!”
We all set off down a sand path but the heat was already soaring higher and higher. The journey wasn’t too bad on the sand apart from the dehydration but we entered the jungle the air became humid and our clothes began to stick to us like glue, it also became hard to breathe. We went on for what seemed like an eternity and at times it became hard to keep putting one foot in front of the other. The one thing that kept us going was where we were.The emerald trees towered above us and the faint call of monkeys and the chirp of insects was all around us. In the distance, the sound of a gushing waterfall could be heard, crashing down onto the rocks underneath.
Beads of sweat started to trickle down my face. I glanced ahead of me. There was Leo at the front, large branch in one hand helping him walk and a map in the other. Issy was behind him, puffing and panting to keep up. Before I could look behind me to see Frankie, he was already right beside me. “You alright?” Frankie asked, mopping his brow.
“Yep! How long away is camp, do you reckon?” I managed to reply back.
“Well, look ahead of you.” I looked. There,
cascading in front of me was the waterfall,
camp for tonight.
To be continued...
Comments
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Random comment!
(Posted on 2008-07-05 14:47:00 by ) -
Random comments welcome
(Posted on 2008-07-01 12:22:00 by ) -
If you insist then.
(Posted on 2008-06-18 21:01:00 by ) -
I shall take that as a compliment!
(Posted on 2008-06-18 07:53:00 by ) -
But, as lying through my teeth is a skill of mine, in the immortal words of Tony the Tiger, I'll say it's grrrrrrrrrreat!
(Posted on 2008-06-17 21:16:00 by ) -
I lost track of where I am now.
(Posted on 2008-06-17 21:15:00 by ) -
To be honest with you Mel, I've hardly read it as it is.
(Posted on 2008-06-17 17:27:00 by ) -
Okay guys Part 5! Now tom, jack, everyone else, please comment ont the story in this box before writing random stuff in it! I need opinions!!
(Posted on 2008-06-15 16:18:00 by ) -
But it's mostly the other way round.
(Posted on 2008-06-13 15:45:00 by ) -
Sorry tom. you know that i like beating you on the leaderboard and vice versa
(Posted on 2008-06-13 11:49:00 by ) -
And you are ganging up on me with Simon, whoever you are. It's a conspiracy.
(Posted on 2008-06-09 15:41:00 by ) -
Read my story and comment on it. Please?
(Posted on 2008-06-09 12:15:00 by ) -
I've beat you again Tom!
(Posted on 2008-06-09 11:45:00 by ) -
I'm grumpy now. That should be my place!
Tom
(Posted on 2008-06-08 21:32:00 by ) -
Someone read my story and comment on it!
(Posted on 2008-06-08 14:25:00 by ) -
Let's see what happens today!
(Posted on 2008-06-08 14:09:00 by ) -
I just realised! I beat you by several places in the leaderboard this week (1st June)! I WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNN
(Posted on 2008-06-08 13:07:00 by ) -
Yey! Although I was joking.
(Posted on 2008-06-06 15:30:00 by ) -
Sorry! I didn't know any1 played on it! Here it is back again!
(Posted on 2008-06-04 07:54:00 by ) -
I'm crying 'cos you got rid of it.
(Posted on 2008-06-03 16:58:00 by ) -
what happened to the doodle game?
(Posted on 2008-06-03 16:57:00 by ) -
Hello everyone!! This is part 3 of my story!!! Hello adam and hello everyone else! Do you like my page!
(Posted on 2008-06-01 14:12:00 by ) -
hello!
(Posted on 2008-05-29 08:22:00 by ) -
why not email it to me and avoid breaking your rules?
(Posted on 2008-05-27 22:12:00 by ) -
Hmm, I'm gonna say it here ...
:)
(Posted on 2008-05-27 08:14:00 by ) -
what's that one then?
(Posted on 2008-05-26 22:27:00 by ) -
Ah, wrong word. I was thinking of one with 7*s.
(Posted on 2008-05-23 15:08:00 by ) -
Ah, but those stars represent letters of the word I want to say but can't because you won't let me! It rhymes with muddy by the way.
(Posted on 2008-05-22 15:19:00 by ) -
hey have fun with my new grafiti game!
(Posted on 2008-05-22 13:28:00 by ) -
still ahead of you tom!
(Posted on 2008-05-22 08:31:00 by ) -
Tom, that's only 6 *s. Just to let you know. Get it right.
(Posted on 2008-05-21 17:46:00 by ) -
I cannot believe it! I'm down four ****** places!
(Posted on 2008-05-21 15:59:00 by ) -
Have a look at the leaderboard now, guys.
(Posted on 2008-05-19 20:22:00 by ) -
We are 2nd and 3rd on the leader board!!! we are special!
(Posted on 2008-05-16 11:43:00 by ) -
We are 2nd and 3rd on the leader board!!! we are special!
(Posted on 2008-05-16 11:43:00 by ) -
It really is bad.
(Posted on 2008-05-15 09:29:00 by ) -
he he!!
(Posted on 2008-05-14 07:51:00 by ) -
And by two views!
(Posted on 2008-05-13 21:07:00 by ) -
I'm just annoyed that you beat me on the leaderboard this week! How could you?
(Posted on 2008-05-13 21:07:00 by ) -
You are very welcome!
(Posted on 2008-05-08 13:46:00 by ) -
THANKYOUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! IT is sooooooooo cool!!
(Posted on 2008-05-08 07:54:00 by ) -
Ok, I've been more efficient than I expected. It is on your file manager section now! What do you think?
(Posted on 2008-05-07 16:14:00 by ) -
Ok, Mel, I'll get onto it before the week ends. Check your folder in the File manager soon!
(Posted on 2008-05-07 15:21:00 by ) -
Jack, I believe it is you. I also believe I am correct. Why the hell are you on about NW so much?
(Posted on 2008-05-07 15:20:00 by ) -
Numberwang's always a winner.
(Posted on 2008-05-07 14:59:00 by ) -
Just something pretty, either something to do with notebooks, pen etc or a beach or something random!!! plz reply with ny other ideas for my page!!!
(Posted on 2008-05-07 12:24:00 by ) -
I'M SPECIAL!
(Posted on 2008-05-06 16:24:00 by ) -
Ok, got any specific image you would like me to use? Email please with details to tom@i-mag.org.uk
(Posted on 2008-05-06 16:21:00 by ) -
Yeah I'd luv 1 thanks tom!!!
(Posted on 2008-05-06 07:52:00 by ) -
Thanks Jack!!
(Posted on 2008-05-06 07:51:00 by ) -
I can't believe you stuck Numberwang on the SwapShop!
(Posted on 2008-05-05 10:12:00 by ) -
Oohhh, Tom. That must be against i-mag rules. Surely it's punishable by death (in other words, reading one of Mel's stories)?
Mel, just joking. No offence meant at all.
(Posted on 2008-05-04 15:11:00 by ) -
that reminds me. Anyone interested in purchasing a slightly used Official Numberwang, Play Numberwang, Numberwang at Home Board Game? It comes with two 400 sided dice!
(Posted on 2008-05-03 21:51:00 by ) -
it really isn't.
(Posted on 2008-05-02 15:57:00 by ) -
That's Numberwang!
(Posted on 2008-05-02 12:30:00 by ) -
Hey, Mel. You see my banners I custom made on my pages. Would you like me to make you one. I'M SPECIAL!
(Posted on 2008-05-02 12:29:00 by ) -
Hey everybody!!! What else would you like to see on the literature page?? Any input is useful!!!
(Posted on 2008-05-02 12:08:00 by ) -
Thanks 4 da compliment!!! aah... u r still as gud as ya used 2 b!
(Posted on 2008-05-02 07:54:00 by ) -
What's with the spinny thing? I like it! I don't get it. You remain the same, almost with writing. To me, I am patheticly hopeless, unlike I used to be.
(Posted on 2008-05-01 17:42:00 by ) -
Hey there!! Please add any comments on this page here!! wat do u think!! lolx
(Posted on 2008-05-01 12:23:00 by )
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